Bloody brilliant. :D

*heart* Oh my god, you are so awesome. This is delightful! I don't know how you do it - I looked at the summary and thought, 'surely that doesn't work,' and then I read it and by the end you'd convinced me. Also, I love the way you write Dunmer.

More like best possible moment.
Talk about plot!
I love how you use "and yet," too. Most people can't do that, particularly in repetition. You do it well, though.
One thing, though. Verb tenses. And really I'm just being particular, as it only happened like, twice, but I didn't want to just praise, you know?

Dear God, that was brilliant. It was one of those stories that made my heart clench (in a good way, I think). I'll be watching for more of these gems!

My god, you write brilliant Tels. :3 I would NEVER have guessed this pair, not in a lifetime, but you SO made it perfect and sweet and cunningly put together and canon.