Glad you finsihed this. Hmm, interesting ending, nature red in tooth and claw!

:P Yay, you finished it! :D lol Nice ending, good job :) Thanks for sharing :)

Yeah, Rachel definitely is going to be kicking some ass!

Aw! Yay, he found her :P Thanks for updating :D

Glad to see the update. Hope you can get Jacob to come to the rescue soon.

Oh boy what's gonna happen now ? :P Thanks for updating :D

Things are starting to get serious here! Hope you get Rachel and Jacob out of trouble soon!

Oh boy, what's gonna happen now? :) Thanks for updating :P

Ooh, I'm glad to see someone is keeping EH alive.. Thanks for the update ! :D

So, something nice finally happended for poor Jacob! But he should have had more faith in Rachel. I'll bet she could hot-wire the car in seconds.

Aww! Really cute :P I hope at least something else will come up to get them out of there! Thanks for sharing ! :D

Can wait for the next chapter or even better chapters. Don't keep us poor famished readers waiting for too long...

Please let something nice happen! Poor Jacob, you know he's not a total idiot!

Uh-oh! Jacob didn't forget where the car is did he? Or is he planning on something else? Thanks for sharing :P

Aww! I hope they can get away! :P Funny how they hesitate on the changing thing.. Thanks for sharing :D