I would have say, this is pretty good, it is not being rushed, and it is well thought out. I think Edward should end up in the desert, basically walking around, complaining about how much he hates deserts, and why he couldn't end up somewhere close to civalization. I also think his alchemy should still work.

Please update soon, for this is indeed a potential favorite of mine.

Signed,
Mr. Nobody

great continue

Yay, update! I like Taang so much that it's okay if Ed is not in the story yet. So Aang and Toph are 17? How old is Ed? Can he do alchemy in Avataverse? Different dimension, different rules I guess ...

By the way, I noticed that your anonymous review feature is disabled. You may want to enable it if you want more reviews.

:-)

You kidding me? Taang and Edwin in the same story? I need to read this. Even if it's crappy. Which I'm sure is not, is just my way of saying you got me at hello!!