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Rhianna L'Ebhra
2010-01-05 . chapter 25
"I FLEW! Okay? ON A GREAT BIG PINK BIRD! Got any more questions, Woody??" -A pink...??-

Oh my dear jumping Fayth, I was laughing my lungs out at this! Can't wait for more of Rin's wonderful cooking and some more tnder moments betwenn Auron and Raiel, as well as-dare I say it?-Jecht beating the chocobo out of that idiot Guado!

Many laughs and much awe,
Rhianna L'Ebhra
Kikyaru360
2010-01-05 . chapter 25
I laughed so hard...tears were in my eyes. Raiel is so funny. I'm glad that Braska, Jecht, and the others all got a reunion before the temple. I feel sorry for the guard. Only slightly though.

Let me see...

BIG PINK FREAKIN' BIRD!!

For some reason, I pictured Raiel holding a bottle of some suspicious liquid over Jecht's head at the agency! She would be all smiley while all of the men would cower in fear. She would kindly ask "What's wrong, guys?" in a voice with that gave just a hint of the tidal wave of mischief that is Raiel.

Wow, I need to lay off of caffeine...

Anyway, I didn't think Raiel would be scared of much, let alone heights, but she is human (Technically some Al Bhed human hybrid, but I'm too tired to come up with better specifics.) Now I know what I meant! She is a person. She has phobias just like anyone else. I wonder what Auron's is...hmm...wait it's water, right? Well, not so much anymore. *Chuckles Slightly*

Back on track, I liked this. I tried to picture Auron with a grin that spread across his face, showing his teeth, and couldn't quite do it. Oh well.

Great! I'll stop bothering you. (You needn't worry about getting 200 reviews. I'm pretty confident that this will achieve that easily.) ^^
SUFFERINGLOSTSOUL
2010-01-05 . chapter 25
I'm game for 200 reviews! Count me in!

Aw, what a nice little reunion. It sure was joyous for everyone to see their good friend again and swap stories.

Raiel, you had your dream finally come true while you were conscious!! Hurray!! :D
Let's keep our fingers crossed that it will continue to happen.

Lol, take that Guado! In your face!
Poor Auron, Raiel sure knows how to keep him on his toes.

Stay well,
~Xiggy
babylight29
2010-01-04 . chapter 25
That was SUPER STUPENDUS I loved it!
bebepantheon
2010-01-04 . chapter 25
this is pretty awesome!was that Guado Seymour? i'm curious or perhaps it is Tromell? lol!
Hikari no Vikki
2010-01-02 . chapter 24
Cute and sweet. Lovely as always.

I shall await your next installment. ;)

~ Hikari no Vikki
lilypop8
2010-01-01 . chapter 24
Oh! I just loved this chapter! Great job, AL! I really hope to see another chapter up soon, possibly? Maybe...? =D

~LP8
SUFFERINGLOSTSOUL
2009-12-29 . chapter 24
Greetings, my friend!
It is very good to hear from you again and be prized with yet another chapter.

Best of wishes to you and your family.

About the previous poll: Whoever it was that rated it 'Pretty good' was clearly suffering from some form of illness or something of the sort. Really, it did not deserve that rating at all.

I feel your sorrow, Raiel. It's completely heart-breaking just thinking about it. Our wonderful Jecht should not have to go through it -neither of them should... But, all in all, it must be done v.v.

I was glad that Raiel noticed the absence of the spheres Jecht had. We all know what he does with them, even if she doesn't. I'm glad that it was pointed out.

This chapter was very heart-warming, as well.
The jokes about the alcohol were spot on! Very funny.

And the tender moment that Raiel shared with Auron was very sweet. And Lord Braska's thoughts were also very warm.

But the best is yet to come!
There's a reunion in the horizon and there couldn't have been a better timing for it!

Take care,
~Xiggy
knyghtstar
2009-12-28 . chapter 24
I swear everytime I read your story there's more fluff that just makes me smile. I hope you had a good Christmas and will have a wonderful New Year. :D
Kikyaru360
2009-12-28 . chapter 24
"They would have a beautiful, happy life together, he knew it without doubt!"

You see!? You always put sentences like that in there, and it is almost unbearable! It's still pretty funny how you put all of those innuendos in there. The four of them really crack me up, though. Let me see, what else?

Ah, yes! This story keeps making me sadder and sadder. Because someone is definitely going to die. Either Braksa summons the final Aeon and someone becomes Sin, (I'm still not entirely sure if it will be Jecht. It's puzzling...keeps me interested.) or they somehow defeat Sin without the Final Aeon, and Jecht disappears into the Farplane. Tears are practically a certainty at the end of this story. I'm going to enjoy the nice parts while they last.

Next, you're story has given me an idea for a story of my own. (Which kind of sucks, because another story will make my update rate a tiny bit slower than it already is, and it is abyssmal right now...but I don't care! Thanks for the inspiration! I'll definitely mention you when the first chappy is out.)

Last, I know you want your picture, but there is a problem. Have you ever been so angry at technology that you wanted to shoot said technological device about sixty times, and then bring in a baseball bat? That happens to me. I need a new scanner for my computer, becuase it's not working. I do all of my coloring for drawings on the computer...Gah, I'm frustrated.

Oh, there is some good news. I passed all of my finals. Not that that has anything to do with this review, but still...

Anyway, I'll wrap this up. Great chapter, great story, you're great! Keep 'em coming! ^^

p.s. I never knew you had a poll! *Goes to check it out*
babylight29
2009-12-28 . chapter 24
There is only one word to describe this chapter and that it AWESOME! I loved everything about it.
bebepantheon
2009-12-28 . chapter 24
o this so kkewl! I wonder what will happen next!! lol, Auron is being sappy! lol, oh well! keep it up!
bebepantheon
2009-12-26 . chapter 23
Auron sure likes his coffee! Anyway like I said before, I really love the story and about their 'union'..at first I was at lost then I just remembered that the same word happen to pop in the FFX dialouge! It meant marriage and so forth! Just imagine a lightbulb lighting up! lol, anyway I just can't wait for the next chapter for it! As for Jecht, he's very funny! Normally I don't read Braska pilgrimage stories but yours sound interesting and I LOVE IT!
bebepantheon
2009-12-25 . chapter 19
just thought I review this story and so far I've only got up to chapter 20...and I have to say...I LOVE READING THIS STORY!! Considering that this is the first story I have ever read about Summoner Braska's pilgrimage and his guardians! I really wish you will continue to update and finish the story soon.! I can't wait until I get to the next chapter...! Soo happy for Auron and Raiel!
black-cat-9288
2009-12-21 . chapter 23
Hey! Great story! Good work. 10/10.
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