GREAT!

Ah. Ah!

I love this! I just joined the D/G forum, and figured I should read around some of the member's stuff... And oh, I love this. I always feel like such a sinner when I read smut, because it's usually plotless. And even if it ISN'T plotless, it just doesn't seem to get anywhere. So I LOVE this idea of a series of smutty, story-telling one-shots!

I particularly adore your Draco. Although I'm still not sure of your Ginny, she's definitely an interesting character, and this is an angle I'm not quite sure I've seen on her before - I look forward to your promised explanation, and the fabled 'Shave Scene' - which sounds devilishly exciting.

My favorite was this last one - I just adored the complete 'what the...?' sort of feeling Draco seemed to have the entire time, and Ginny's surprising happiness with simply moving along. I particularly enjoyed the way that Draco completely changed his tune post Ginny's 'trust game', with his casual "Leaving so soon, Pet?".

Can't wait for more!

I've been trying to review to this since last night, but ff keps fudging up.

Your fic is really wonderful.

It takes me a moment to figure out what ime period they are in.
I love DG fics and seriously think that they should've ended up together

awesome story

Yay, the bath bubbles incident.
Fantastically done.
Gillyweed- what an idea, that really desevers some major credit!!
Loving Ginny
And of course loving Draco,
looking forward to more!
Waho looking forward to the shaving scene and also will you do the dentention?
Please update soon, loved reading your creations!
Cbz
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Okay, so this was definitely hot. I'll confess that I skim-read most of the actual smut parts (I really just don't like smut) but I did enjoy the chapter. I can just imagine how stunned Draco would have been to suddenly find a girl in the bathroom with him, not to mention when she decided to strip. The poor boy was certainly taken advantage of in his male weakness. Ginny certainly is a tease.

Very nice. I love her spunk, even though I've decided that my suspicions are confirmed; the girl is mad. Not that I blame her.

I like how you're weaving this tale together in an almost languid fashion. You're jumping around in time, but it doesn't make the story feel disjointed or disconnected. It's more like remembering something out-of-order than anything, and perhaps that's because the focus is on the characters, not a central mystery.

That said, I definitely want to know how they got from her seducing him in the bath to his force in the grocery store. Right now I can only imagine.

Lovely descriptions in this chapter.

I feel like this vignette is a great window into the whole dynamic of the relationship--a snapshot or analogy of the whole story. Ginny's blithe determination to have what she wants causes her to do things that she'd normally never do, and eventually, that will haunt both of them.

Perhaps she /is/ a little mad.

I threw your rec advice to the winds and decided to browse, and lo and behold, yours was the first on the list. ;) How's that for irony?

I LOVE that this isn't pure D/s stuff. Your description of her obstinacy fits well, and it keeps this from getting too dark, too quickly. Clearly this is a bit earlier in their relationship; it appears that things do get a little more intense pre-grocery shopping. Still, it seems very Ginny to want to play this game yet not surrender completely to his whim without complaint.

It's definitely intriguing.

Really good, shows how the relationship started to come about.
I love how you are taking snapshots at their time line
Looking forward to more developments and smut tehe!
Ack screw Harry and Astoria they just get in the way of the DG wonder!
Looking forward to the bubbles fiasco in here and also the shaving thing would be quite good.
Also for development in relationships detentions normally are a good starter. Just an idea if your interested?
Please write more
Because as always addicted to your writing!
Cbz
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Loving the violence and possessiveness of Draco in this chapter.
Really good, most people don’t understand that Draco isn’t all lovey dovey but more broken, ie violent etc
And you have captured this in a sexy good way which is fantastic!
Also really pleased you are making this a series!
Please update soon!
Cbz
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Haha naughtiness with Strawberries.
Very good as always! Loved the DG interaction and some of the randomness”
Look forward to more DG as adults.
P.s PLEASE get rid of Harry!! I HATE HIM!! HE ALWAYS INTERFEERS!
Sorry lil rant!
Update soon please, now of to review other chapters!
Cbz
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An interesting way of approaching a story. I enjoy the jumping back and forth in time...it makes it more exciting because you don't know what part of the story you are getting next.
I'm making my way through all your fics at the moment and I must admit there is not one yet that I haven't really enjoyed...both in plot and quality of writing.

"like hot gravy on chips or melted fudge on ice cream"

Yum.

Anyway, I liked this, and I'm sorry it took me so long to read it. Ginny is certainly a conniving little wench, and, of course, her methods are truly Gryffindor. LOL.

I like the fact you had Draco push her away, and that he flinched when she touched him /there/. I have never thought that Draco would be the kind of boy to give into his hormones that easily, especially to Ginny Weasley.

One thing I noticed was that you noted she lost her cloak twice. You could probably fix that, and there are a few typos in this one that could be fixed, but other than that it was lovely.

There wasn't any smut, and I still enjoyed it, not like I expected not to.

Anyways, Ginny is insane. Now, not only is she dominating in the bedroom, she is also clinically insane. I kind of wanted to hop into the scene and slap some sense into her. That is a compliment for you because very few writers are able to evokke true emotion in their readers.

Question, is this going backwards then? I think it is but I'm not exactly sure.

Ann