OK first off It's a great plot. And thank you for not making her a toddler. Too many of those stories floating around. However if you suddenly found out you had two siblings somewhere, would you really warm up to them so quickly?

This isn't too believable. And a great story has an edge of believability to it.

hey welcome back and i see dean finally came to his senses and started realizing christy is his sister and i hope she gets to hunt with the boys

I love the update, I can't wait for more!

I really like your story so far, it's well written and interesting.

This is a very interesting story. Christy seems like a strong character, not a Mary-Sue, or an extreme smart aleck, like most of the sister fic's you see on here. Keep it up!

Intriguing story idea, what really caught my eye though is the setting. You set it in Pismo Beach, California. Do you vacation there or anything? I'm only asking because I live near there and was just wondering. Keep up the good work!

Idiotic, thick headed , jerk-Dean! Drown him in the sea..and make Christy to save the he would learn his lesson.

in chp 3 me and christy are kinda alike. we have issues with our mom. she always on my case and thats why my brother moved out he couldn't stand it. in chp 4 dean is being selfish and a dick he needs to apreciate christy she has a hard life as it is she doesn;t need it from dean

good chapter, short but good- can't wait for the next chapter update soon :)

good chapter hope you update again soon :)

this is getting better with each chapter so please continue

this stoey is good u should continue

good chapter... not sure why you didn't like it :) it's really quite good

_ Another great chapter!

Don't let us rush you! You can't rush art xD

great chapter update and i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can please