Yea for fun, Action!Vaughn, make-out stories! I just finished season 1 of "Alias," and have spent most of it alternating between shouting, "Will! You're going to get yourself killed!" and "Just kiss her already, Vaughn! Sheesh!" So stories like this keep me from going crazy. Thanks!)

Ahh! That was so good! I'm off to read more of your stories now :D

Oh, this is fantastic! Every detail was perfect, the characters were true to life, I am so impressed! Thank you for writing this.

That was really, really, really good! Classic agent disguise-pretend you're making out and get busted that way. I loved it!

This piece is absolutley terrific. I loved it!

Hello!

I realize that this fan fic was posted Jan. 5, 2002 and I'm reading it now, April 5, 2002. You may not be expecting any more reviews from The French Connection, but I had to comment on your story. Especially since I noticed that you only left it at chapter one! Thank you so much for writing such an incredible length of Alias fan fic. I hate it when stories are in small chapters. They make you wait just to torture you.
I really enjoyed reading TFC and I beg, plead for you to continue another chapter!

I would like to take the time on the parts I found absolutely delightful.

Marshall, of course! I love reading his explanations. Too funny, Souris!

The entire mission in broad scope. Nicely done. The no talking thing because Dixon would hear bit? Very realistic! Kudos to that!

And, too me, heheh the best part was that amazing cover up on the couch! The breast, the medallion..ooh it gave me shivers! Seriously. :D I don't mean to sound corny, or weird, but I truly think you have talent. Your vocabulary, sentence structure (past, present and future tense) is highly developed. Please, keep going. If not for me, then for the rest of the people that review and those who are too mean to not review and only read.

Thank you! You are amazing!

Oooh! S/V kissage! Good work this was really fun.

if you are gonna write more on this story, please do! them kissing was unexpected. well, thanks for the cute story.

I've read it some time ago and it's still one of my all-time favorite Alias fanfics! It's really amazing! The story works so well and captures everything Alias is about. And the Syd/Vaughn scenes are just killer! Plus you've got a really great handle on Marshall! He sounds so true!

Nice, nice, nice. Thanks for that great piece!

I wondered if you were a Patricia Veryan fan, how nice to find out you are! I love that series, it's one of my all time favorites! And this story was wonderful! I really, truly loved it!

Wow! That was wonderful! I thoroughly enjoyed and can't wait to read more of your work!

Wow! Excellent writing! The pace is good, incredibly detailed, and yay, the Action!Vaughn This would work as an actual episode great job and I look forward to more stories.

that was great, hope you write mroe soon

Great story! I liked your characterization and the "Action!Vaughn" bits. I'm going to have to go read Patricia Veryan now.