Great story! I'd like to know what the Key does. Maybe you should do a sequel?
I saw your painting on deviant Art...Excellent!

I mean his telekinetic powers. Not telepathic powers. It's not as funny when you have to go back and correct it. Maybe I need a beta for my feedback comments.

Well, you can't stop now! Well, I suppose you could, but it would be so mean. I'm counting on you to at least crank out one more chapter so we can meet little Sylar. I can just picture him on the playground, using his telepathic powers to blow little girl's skirts up.

AHH HAH!

KNEW IT!

:D

Delightful. That was a lovely twist. My poor tragic Sylar. This is great.

You sneaker! As much as I hate the idea of something distracting you from churning out the chapters on "Treason", I would be thrilled to read a Heroes fic by you. I say you do it. (Do it. Do it. Do it.) If you can write Sylar half as well as you write Spock, it'll be great.

I enjoyed this and hope you would continue have you considered who the mother would be. Possibly Elle?

So.

Hello you. LOL. I see your cheating on Start Trek and sneaking around with Heroes now.

That's ok. :) I won't tell. SO LONG AS YOU KEEP THIS SHIT UP! This is a story here, not a one shot. Do it. Do it. *Pokes* DO IT!

Did you always watch Heroes, or were u like me and did a crash course in it after watching Trek? What a fab show either way.