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Reviews for: Annoying, Blue, and MINE
Evilevergreen
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
Loved Shego's last line. "It got lippy." I cracked up when I read it. =D
BlameItOnMyParents
2009-09-10 . chapter 1
Funny story
Jen Rock
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
This is great. The characterization is perfect and there are a lot of amusing moments but Shego getting angry at the machine was the best. "It got lippy!" was a hilarious line as was Drakken's confusion. Wonderful job.
Mr. Wizard
2009-09-01 . chapter 1
Nicely done. Good to see the man doing his own work, and reaping the usual reward. Especially liked the peek inside Shego's mind
Mengsk
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
That was awesome! Best quick laugh I've had in a while.
Ogehsim
2009-08-30 . chapter 1
Last line is gold. I can totally imagine Shego snapping that and then stomping off. And "muzzy" is a wonderful word. :D
RedBlueGreen
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
Very amusing, especially with Shego thinking "The damn machine was smirking at her! Of all the nerve!"

The denial is well done too, and the whole piece has the neat comedy tone of their interactions in the series.
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