 Evilevergreen 2009-10-24 . chapter 1Loved Shego's last line. "It got lippy." I cracked up when I read it. =D |
 BlameItOnMyParents 2009-09-10 . chapter 1Funny story |
 Jen Rock 2009-09-06 . chapter 1This is great. The characterization is perfect and there are a lot of amusing moments but Shego getting angry at the machine was the best. "It got lippy!" was a hilarious line as was Drakken's confusion. Wonderful job. |
 Mr. Wizard 2009-09-01 . chapter 1Nicely done. Good to see the man doing his own work, and reaping the usual reward. Especially liked the peek inside Shego's mind |
 Mengsk 2009-08-31 . chapter 1That was awesome! Best quick laugh I've had in a while. |
 Ogehsim 2009-08-30 . chapter 1Last line is gold. I can totally imagine Shego snapping that and then stomping off. And "muzzy" is a wonderful word. :D |
 RedBlueGreen 2009-08-29 . chapter 1Very amusing, especially with Shego thinking "The damn machine was smirking at her! Of all the nerve!"
The denial is well done too, and the whole piece has the neat comedy tone of their interactions in the series. |