I like the way you didn't indicate who was speaking until the story was half done. That shows confidence in your powers of writing dialogue that's true to the characters, trusting the reader to fit the voice to the face. Well, your dialogue was so authentic, I was able to ID the speakers in no time at all. You really should write more of these little scenes.

Loved it! You've got the characters bang on! Perfect! Loved it! I'm rambling... But yeah it was great! Write more!

I wannna be a narwhal! That's a whale with a horn. :D

Short but sweet, a really good short story. You've got the charecters bang on right, especially Maggie.

Haha! I like this light banter you have going on with the characters. Very well written.

I loved this! You've totally captured the characters perfectly, as well as the silly little conversations they have.