A great story. Very good.

Um...Not much originality here...What was with the Disney characters? Also, some grammar would have been nice.

very funny send me back an email

I though i was the only one who didn't like the story guess i wasn't when i read

the reviews

Boreing but great fanfiction anyhow. I am glad you wrote it. Don't be insulted. You are brilliant writer. You have talent

Well, I liked the intro and the set up in the bar was pretty neat but as for your one paragraph condensation of the movie, well, that was frankly rather boring and a bit of a waste of time. I *think* you would have been better to bulk up the story of the ugly princess instead of summarising the entire movie in less then 400 words.

i feel a great deal of pity for the poor soul who intends on reading this story. they are going to be bored outa their wits

Very good, but where are these deleted scenes to which you refer? They are not on my UK DVD!

kool, summary thing! i neva knew about Fiona's birth to teenager hood