I like the beginning action.
Sweet, looks like it's going to be interesting.
In this chapter, I like the Thunder action. XD.
btw, update!
Keep writting.^^

Take Care!~ Haibara Kawaii.

Nice one! I like this story! Manjoume and Judai are always rival... Like Yugi and Kaiba...
Please read and review my sotry too!

Not bad i like it good job, the rival between Jaden, and Chazz, i say make another story

I really liked it. It was cute, and Manjoume's attitude was done so well. It's also a really good concept you have going on here; plus the little friendship part is done really well. I loved the way you started it as well. Great job. :]

Heh, that was incredibly cute. I wouldn't be surprised if they had one of those, after all. Juudai's medals had to go somewhere! (and I think we discussed this, right?) Nicely done friendship piece, and there should be many more of them.