Made me feel great inside after reading :)

There should so be a sequel!

This is _so_ good. You have no idea. It is the hottest, best thing I have ever read -but, somehow, stays within 'PG' realms. That's a mark of true talent. You did it with the ambience, with meaning, with descriptors...no need for crude, fumbling, forced-seeming "sex-romp" stuff which one sees too much of, and which with characters like R&K, tends to break character, in a story.

This kept completely within character, and yet was so extremely sexy- and HOT!

Very few stories do this with a subtle enough hand, without having to bang you over the head with overt sexualizing. But this one had me hot and bothered! :} Seriously. Totally taking me a while to cool off. :D

GOOD JOB

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I truly liked this story and I think you did a good job with the ending. It was a simple story, and kept to the characters. The pace of the story was very good, though I would have liked just a bit more dialogue. I especially liked the final paragraph, the bittersweet ending felt right and didn't damped the mood at all. Good job

AWESOME!

Awsome Fanfic JlynCSS!