M, I think this was kinda' a slow chapter; though, In retrospect, one of the better pieces of literature I've read on the site. I'd much like to see a continuation of this plot-line, maybe the folowing of Cloud and Yuna to Midgar, supposing that's where they are headed. I have to admit, it is a good piece, but still leaves much open to thought; a great fic.

-- Zak

A beautifully orchestrated piece, I believe. The various ties to the past FF X characters and allusions to the previous games were nice, though; I must say, with Yuna's connections, Cloud's are very much lacking. I do hope his story is fleshed out in the second chapter; though I have noticed, that during his out-burst with Yuffie/Rikku, Cloud seemed slightly uncharacteristic. Anyway; I LOVED the S.O.L.D.I.E.R. Pose; and it was not lost on me. Hilarious stuff.

-- Zak

Aw. It makes me sad. Hmm. I enjoyed reading it, though! I've been obsessed with this pairing ever since I saw Dead Fantasy.

Haa, it makes me laugh though that he's all emotional about endangering her, when she's...well, Yuna. XD

Anyways, thank you for writing this :D I enjoyed reading it!

That was a beautiful crossover. I loved it and you made it seem so realistic. I definitely think that your portrayal of both Cloud and Yuna are perfect. Cloud's ever brooding while Yuna's the innocent, caring yet stubborn type. I loved it. The ending was great by the way and that epilogue was very entertaining.

That was really well written and I love the pairing!

So are they going to FF 7 World now what about Tifa? and Yeah Cloud/Yuna make a cute couple not unless Sephiroth tries to Kill her off to but yeah good work!.

You so have to make a sequel for this, there aren't enough stories for this pairing. I hope to see more from you!

I like the way you covered so much ground by giving fragments of each stop they made along the journey. I also like the way her emotions slowly creep over Yuna, and the second (IMO, more important) meaning behind Cloud's reiteration that he shouldn't have let her come with him.

Thank you for writing this!

Its so hard to find a good crossover and you've done that! yay for you! keep writing, and it makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. Thanks to you!

Really good so far. I can't wait to see what you will do with it.

Seems to be a very good premise. Keep it up.

HEY! I LOVE THIS!

Personally I'm a fan of the Yuna/Cloud pairing. Especially FFX Yuna (not FFX-2 Yuna).

Please continue writing!

Keep it up! I like it :D