Very good. The characters were in-character, and you wrote Ema especially well. It's hard finding fics where she's in character, it seems.
Kristoph was well done, he was as charming as always ^_^

The ending was quite ominous.

I remember this from the kink meme. :3 I liked it, also kinda explains Ema's disdain to Klavier a bit. It was a good ending.

No its not lame it was quite interesting :D

Thaats quite good. It flowed nicely, inviting thereader to read more.I like it! Yeah it made sense time wise - clever you! I can't give any advice on Krisoph, haveing never written as him, and being quite shit at writing. Yeah,the ending was good. I wanna read more!!Considererd a sequal? Maybe they could get together, before hes so cruelly taken away from her.