Great chapter!
Haha, it's been so long since I've watched the show that I don't even know the scenes you 'altered'! Haha.
I'm really enjoying this!
Cougar is such a sweetie, even when he tries not to be!
As always, update soon!

-Liz

Ohh... another story from you!! YAY!!
It sounds pretty cool!! and I already have my favorites!
yay for drama! XDXD YAY for engineers! XD oh! I meant researchers!!
Good start, my friend!

Great chapter! It felt like I was watching episode two, but with a little more insight. After the plane landing you really don't hear a lot of Mimori's inter voice. I love what you have done with the chapters so far. I can not wait until you start to break off from the anime! It should be interesting. I wonder what the Cougar will do ;)

Keep writing! *waves flags excitedly*

I'm totally loving this story, Carrie!
Mimori was never my favorite character but I'm really liking her in this one.
Great job on this!
I can't wait for the next one!

-Liz

This was fantastic!
I haven't watched this for a very, VERY long time. But I'm slowly starting to remember some things! I love it so far!
I'm off to read the next chapter now!

-Liz

“My fastest time ever! I –love- it! Two more seconds to live!” [[We talked about this before. We all know what he is going to use that two seconds for later!]]

I must say that you have done an amazing job with this chapter. I feel like I missed so much watching the first episode. There were so many details that you brought light to that I had over looked.

Cougar still makes me chuckle though. I can't wait until you start getting your hands dirty and get your word magic flowing by taking Cougar and Mimori's characters and develope them in your story! She doesn't know it yet but she has a need for speed. It can only be satisfied by one man!

I am really excited about this story and can't wait to read more! And you are right, you have to write what you feel, and if you aren't feeling the other stories don't write them. When the time comes they will get what they need!

Formula: Magna = Anime = Your Writing (If anime were put into words, you would be the one to do it)