That was excellent! Fun, Exciting, Humorous. What more could anyone ask for. This was a really great fanfiction! Wonderful! And Kanon is my favorite character too.

O.O Cute... very cute... HEY! HOW'D THE KIDS GET BRAD OUTTA THE HOUSE!

Lilka: psst... she has a soft spot for tough-built and good-looking(?) guys like Brad. (Lilka looks at Flameshe who is ranting in front of the PC for no reason at all and each word must have 'Brad' in it.
But, I gotta hand it to Kanon. She saved everyone... thank Raftina...(giggles) Anywayz, when're u gonna write an A/A type? (Action/Adventure) You're good in humor, you should try Action/Adventure. a writer like you could whip up a good plot, right?

I get the feeling you insulted Star Ocean 2. SHAME ON YOU! Besides that, I liked this fic. I would have said I loved it but that Star Ocean thing pissed me off a bit. Oh well.

hey that was great! I really like it! it was sooo funny! And, kanon's my favorite character too!

nice! i relly like! hope you wrie more fics!

The first line is a little funny. Kanon had ten minuets before getting to Meria? *imagines Kanon dressed up as an 18th century lady with the big wigs and dancing a minuet* XD Cute idea, by the way.