Depressing much... but i guess it would be a bad fic if it wasn't. Very poignant. I loved it.

right more, and make them make up, goddammit! lol, u cant just end there! please post another piece up soon! and please review my SW fic if u can!

Jessika

I don't usually review stuff (i know, i'm evil...) but this is incredible! I love it! By now, you probably know that you're an awesome writer, but let me tell you again, "You are an AWESOME writer!"

So sad but I liked it!

I just can't get enough of this! More, please?

OMG! I found it! I am sooooo happy! I even posted a thing on the forum lookin for this! You are the best author ever! You rule! Man this story is sooooo good! Its like my favorite of all time! You're goin on my favorite authors list and so is your story! MAn, you are too cool!

Wow... I'm speechless. A glimpse of things to come, I think. You captured the characters perfectly; Amidala still has that "queenly" impetuousness in her, and Anakin has developed arrogance characteristic of the dark side. And what a way to end... what a zinger! Kudos to you.)

Amidala breaking a window with her hand repeatedly? Well, love can do crazy things and a broken heart can do crazier things. I would never have thought of her doing that, but if there is a dwindling in thier relationship, I wouldn't be surprised if she did put her fist through a window. Good job, it shocked me and intrigued me all at once.

This is such a good story, I just HAD to read it again! I'll be visiting your other stories too. I miss them.

This was a good story Candy, I can't imagine how much it would hurt to break a window with your hand. I think obi would come and save the day. Obi is the best

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

i don't think that they would ever fal out of love though

How sad. There's a special kind of sorrow for doomed lovers.

When you know there will be no reconciliation, that

this is the start of the crumbling.

that was really really good!

aw, its so sad!

but its good

Wow, great story and well written too! So sad Keep up the great work!