wow...wow

that's like, all I can say



wow

hauntingly magnificent!

I really loved this. Sakura killing Sasuke is a concept I've been playing with for awhile now, but it's hard to make it happen realistically, both logistically and emotionally. Your logistics are a little bit questionable, but at least they're innovative. And emotionally, this Sakura is far stronger than I think she really is, but it's quite nice to see her that way every once in awhile. It's not so over the top as to be entirely unbelievable. It's Sasuke that I find the most credible here.

A nice snapshot of a moment in time. Thanks for sharing.

Whoo! This was beautiful. The way you tied the children and the ruthless, killing adults together was amazing.

I loved how you portray Sakura in this. A girl can't take the type of chasing for too long really, because women are always the practical ones. sasuke is just stuck in his own time isn't he.

Ouch... that was tragic.
Very well done - I actually wasn't sure what she was doing myself!

I really liked the way you portrayed Sakura, it was different than I expected (which is a good thing). I also really liked the subtle parallels throughout; they added without making the piece repetitive. Great job.

This was very... well I can't think of a single word, but I loved it none the less. You could really feel Sakura's mental exhaustion of chasing after Sasuke and for simply caring for so many years. And Sasuke? You wrote him exceptionally well. Sad ending, but fitting I think for the Sasuke and Sakura in this one-shot.

Favorite part:
He stares at her for a moment, and she knows he wants to, can feel the power building in him, reaching boiling point. But she also knows he can’t, because Uchiha Sasuke freezes time where he wants it, and he froze her at twelve years old, knocked out on a stone bench with tears drying on her face.

It was simply beautiful and concise. :)

This was sad, but I like how strong Sakura has become in it.
It's weird, I used to be pro-SasuSaku but now it just seems hopeless. Now, it seems much more likely that NaruSaku will happen so i've become more accepting of it.

beautiful, just beautiful

beautiful. loved it.

Guh - wow!
That was - beautiful! D;

Haha, poor Uchiha.

That's so sad. It's got such a powerful hopeless feeling. I am feeling very down now. Very nice though. In a few words you captured the feeling of the scene. I figured she was doing something like that when her fingers twitched. :( I am sad. -WV

Nice story! That was awesome. I love how Sakura killed Sasuke. There needs to be more stories like this one. Nicely done.

kickass!