WHY IS EVERY THING YOU WRITE SO MORBID? I'm sorry but I've read ALL of your Seaquest stories and Lucus is either getting beat up, is dying, or has tried to kill himself. Maybe you're just venting your feelings after Johnathan Brandis died but GEEZE! Not one ray of sunshine! EVER! I liked the stories but now I am SERIOUSLY depressed!

Wow, in retrospect, this looks creepy prophetic, now, doesn't it? Well written.

you always make me cry! i dont wanna cry, i think i need a break! will somebody please, for once just make something up where Lucas doesn't die, or get tortured, or maimed, or raped, or beaten, or drugged, or put in a hospital? no?...oh ok

i guess that *would* be kinda wierd...)

Could have been written in different format, it was alittle disorganized and I had to keep backtracking to figure out who was thinking. Generally good though.

That was soooooooooo sad. I am crying as I type this.

wow...ok, I'm crying now. That was really good, way depressing, but really good.

Awwww! Thats so sad! *sniff sniff* that was really well done. kudos to you! so sad, i think i'll go read it again. that was a good one.

Oh My God. I'm crying so I can't type all the things this story makes me feel. All I can say is Oh. My. God.

ohhhhhhhhhhhhh...awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...thats so sad :0(

You made me cry.

wow... I loved how you conected all the diferent ways that the members of the crew were grieving. Very effective, and awesomely written. Great job!

Hey that was a very good story. It was very moving and deep. Great job with the emotions. Keep up the work.