This was really good

awww, the poor, lovesick, chain-smoking puppy.

Hmm, I do believe that dear Leon needs some kind of healthier release... XD Anyway, I really liked this - I think you captured Leon's feelings well, as well as Anya's. For example: "...and you can't look away. Obviously she can, 'cause that's exactly what she does..." This was a good example of an every day Leon-Anya interaction. However, I kinda wish that maybe something new would happen as well. Well, I'll read Insomniac as well and see if something else does happen. Ja matta ne! . - Cady

Nice piece of work, I'm serious. This is really good; I liked it a whole lot. That silly Leon.

wow! that story was amazing i just hope thats not the end it can go so much further than that. that story has alot of potential i love the part about the girl being your addiction and not the cigerrets or the nictine.

thank u

u at least wrote a page

it'd be great if you'd write

the more to the story

it's one of my favorite manga

(using a friends account)

I liked all the angst with him puffing away thinking of her.

i really love this story

probably because its the first gothic sports story that has more than 2 paragraphs

congrats on that ]

and i hope you keep writing cause you're really good at it