|Reviews for The Next Clue|
| 13Mysterious12 8/31/09 . chapter 5
TOO MUCH KISSING! IT BURNS! Nice otherwise. )
| Amy Cahill 8/31/09 . chapter 5
Aw. 'Ian seized his chance'. Cute!
| music4evah 8/31/09 . chapter 5
Ok. I like your plot line. In a way. . . The kissing thing was a BIT to much for me. I mean, I love Ian/Amy, but that was a little. . . to much. But it's still ok. And. . . the whole searching for clues part, I really think what you did was a little random. If you'd just thought it out a little more, it could have been better and more like the book. And I have a question. . . If Amy was kissing Ian, then how could Ian be talking to Natalie? That was a little confusing.
I really don't mean to be rude, but you could make this story better! You are full of great ideas! Don't be discuraged. Keep writing!
| The New Ace of Spies 8/31/09 . chapter 5
A bit OOC but very funny! You should have seen me! Laughing hysterically.
| The New Ace of Spies 8/31/09 . chapter 4
| Crazydragonlord 8/31/09 . chapter 4
| Twin of Alice 8/31/09 . chapter 4
omg that is going to be good!
| Amy Cahill 8/30/09 . chapter 3
Wow I love Greece. I'm like 1% or 2%(maybe ;)) Greek. LOL! anyways make it a AMY/IAN STORy! Ian still likes Amy. Make them meet at the museum. you rock!
| music4evah 8/30/09 . chapter 3
This is good. But I just have a question. . . Is this after book three, or book four?
| The New Ace of Spies 8/30/09 . chapter 3
Wait, is this after Book 3? Or Book 5? Bit confusing...
| The New Ace of Spies 8/30/09 . chapter 2
lol! Just a bit short but hahaha!
| Vulpeculis 8/30/09 . chapter 3
your promise better be sincere ;). Hahaha i'm so funny! Just keep writing ok?
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| 13Mysterious12 8/29/09 . chapter 2
Well it is good for your first. Update.