Very nice! I can't believe that I missed this story before! I loved the amount of detail you put into your world. I am curious how this story will get to the point that the game was at though. I would seem a little silly for Kratos to have two pairs of wings and how would Yuan have lived so long? Is the Spiritua in your story the same on mentioned in the game, or do they just have the same name? I vaguely recall that Mithos was a popular name...

I am kinda disappointed that It'll be nearly a decade before Kratos sees his family again. I would love to see more interaction between them.

Anyways, I loved the story! I'll definitely be looking for more in the future!

O.O ...It could use some work, but you have my interest n.n

Antal and Caelum mean angel? I see...(jots it down hasitly) Obsessed? What?