Congratulations! I'm a great fan of your stories!! This one is incredibly sweet, and the last chapter even made me cry! XD Congatulations, this fanfic is really beautiful =)

I think you've captured another facet of their friendship in a beautiful way.
Chapter 1 & 2 are quite cute,ending with Enrique's witty words, particularly chapte 2's watering flowers with wine :D though over all, it was actually a bit...er... haunting(?) dealing with both their underlyign fears of losing each other, either way.
But chapter 3 held the most impact,since it was the saddest;it felt as if they will never meet again forever;until I read the ending :P

Beautiful :)

It's been quite sometime since you wrote a Beyblade fanfic, and I must say, I'm glad you're writing for the Majestics still. There's a severe lack of Majestics fics around :(

Anyhow, nice chapter,

Later,
glitteredvixen06