Nice ending, mate. Bahamut showing up was awesome.

that last scene where everyones picking teams reminds me of final fantasy seven. it was cool.

you know if all the mist disapears does that mean that all the airships back on the mist continent crash? I think they should seeing is to how there fuel source is gone...

Wo!! now this was awesome!

Can't wait for 'Secrets'!

dude this chap was LONG!! and i love it that you used P4 music^^ i'm a big fan of P4^^ and to be honest, it really fit the fight^^

And so it ends... pu... quality still is there. Onto the next arc!

Ah, sorry I haven't reviwed in a while >.<!! I've been very busy...

Daniel: No you haven't. You've been playing World of Warcraft for the past week and so.

Lily: Jerk! Well, I haven't been on my laptop for a long time now! I've been on my dad's computer...

Daniel: And it took you an hour to check all your mail. Wow...

Lily: You be quiet! Anyway, wonderful chapter! I loved it, and I can't wait for disc three! It'll be awesome! Can't wait to read it.

~LP8 and Daniel

So the last part of the 2'nd story came to an end.

And with a bang. Nice written at the Iifa tree^^.

The several days on the Blue Narcissus and in Alexandria were pretty short described as many things could've happened. Both emotionally and for the two newly joined summoners.

C ya when the 3'rd story is out... Please insert Disc 3

No Romance

it look like story 2 of M.O.L.C is over and the 3 one is soon can't wait to read

Wow, epic retelling of the Battle of the Iifa Tree. Nicely done, Duelist!

Now I'm REALLY stoked for the next installment of the Melodies of Life Chronicles. BRING ON THE EPIC! THE EXILE DEMANDS IT!

Ahem, well anyway...until next time!

"The Exile" Cyrus Truth

daw ron gets a girlfriend xDD

yay eiko's here!!^^

great chap^^ i really enjoyed reading it^^

yay hurray for vivi

i like No. 288: he's nice and, i guess, made vivi to come think about something ... in particular i'd just say

lol for the quizmaster xDD and for the dwarf who though ron would be Kuja xDD

yay finally on the Outer Continent^^

wow ... vivi can think about something FAST xD

Wowee. Long time since I last visited here. Anyways, the plot seems to be progressing quickly as usual. Ron's backstory is getting fleshed out, and grammar is actually improving. The flow of the story is much better.

I like fishies.