"they were learning about love potions with Snape," - whose knowledge of said potions must surely be purely theoretical? Otherwise, EW! Can you IMAGINE being under the influence of a love potion that Severus Snape brewed?!
“I hate this,” Ron said, adding rose petals, the final ingredient, to their potion. “It smells like a perfume factory in here.” - Well, what SHOULD it smell like then, Ronald Bilius Weasley?
"Harry snorted. “And love potions can help us defeat Voldemort by making him fall for us?” Lavender looked horrified, but Hermione and Ron sniggered, despite the name." - EW, that is even worse: Imagine Tom Riddle Junior fawning all over somebody from the light side after he ingested a love potion that person brewed!
"and I want a two parchment essay on anything dealing with love potions," - Slightly OT (off the topic) question: But how long do you reckon one parchment would be, then? Would, say, a thousand words, be equal to one parchment?
"He ran right by Snape, who luckily was so infuriated with teaching how to make love potions," - Like WE care about his feelings anyhow...
"The spell makes you fall for the person you’re closet to," - 'The spell makes you fall for the person you’re closest to,'.
Hermione is kind of funny once she is under the spell/enchantment.

Hi, this was discussed here:
http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=6269

yay! its soo good!

aw i feel all tingly inside!

oooo!!!! great story!!!! i love it! :) i hope you update soon :)

Very nice....

You may not have intended this story to be sad, but I found it so. The ending was hopeful, but nothing was guaranteed -- just like real life. I suppose I'll just have to edit it in my mind to get the ending I want. The comedy was satisfying, and the characters all seemed true to their natures. Reading this story was like sipping warm cocoa on a cool evening. My preferred ending would have been the marshmallow on top; but even without it, the warm feeling remains. Thanks.

wicked kewl

y cant harry and hermione fall in love with each other like they r sposed 2? dat is truly stuffed, man.

VERY VERY GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FUNNY TOO, ABOUT THE "ENCHANTMENT". this one's goin in ma faves. ~*skyiela*~ :D ;) :)

LOVELY story, I´m TOTALLY UP for a follow-up series to it!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is a lovely story!!!!!!!!!

OH MY GOD!!!! You HAVE to write a follow-up series to this! My life depends on it! Yeah, I gotta get a life, I know... the life I have now came with a free tote bag : )

Awww, that's really cute. But Harry he's already starting to like her, he just doesnt know it yet*smiles knowingly*

(I read it all, but I'm only reviwing on part 1) I enjoyed it very much!!!!!