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Karina
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
Amazing. Sad but perfect. Absolutely spot on! When I finally get around to making a real fanfic account for myself I will come and review every one of your stories and talk (in length)about how talented an author you are :)
Hermowninny
2009-10-11 . chapter 1
Very sweet. I loved this!
Eternally Seventeen
2009-09-29 . chapter 1
Oh, wow. That was so good, it actualluy brought tears into my eyes! VEry well-written and introspective. Keep it up! :)
larkinlover
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
excellent drabble, I loved the time jumps. great little correlation with the current plot of birthdays and beyond too, Isawwhatyoudidthere. wonderful little tidbit, keep it up!
Starkiller
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
Oh god, did that ever give me a lump in my throat. You've got to admit though, I am getting better at reading fics where Fred's is, erm, unFredded! XD Excellent piece of writing. You just get better and better with every story.
MBP
2009-09-05 . chapter 1
You know, I read this when you first published it a week ago, and it just rocked me thoroughly... it was hard to believe how much, even, given how long ago this book came out -- but that, of course, is a testament to your writing, Katy, as always.

I love Lee. I always have. And I love the way you've portrayed him here. He was one of the people it had to be the hardest to be during that time, I would think. It's easy to forget the friends when you're so focused on the family, I think, but Lee is almost a Weasley given his closeness to the twins, and that's so clear in this story.

I loved the structure, too, as you moved days, months and finally a year away. It does get slightly easier, of course -- but it never really goes away. Brilliant job, as usual.
WishingHeart
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
Amazing. :) I really love how you wrote Lee's personality. We don't get to see much of him, but I think it's perfect!
Writting2StayHalfSane
2009-09-01 . chapter 1
I have chills! Poor Lee. He's often overlooked durring this time because George has lost his twin but Lee's lost his best friend. Well done!
NellieNotMolly
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
Beautifully sad, because it is so real.
Love this: "...life is for living... they must live it to the full for the sake of those they lost... they have no choice."
GoddessofYouth
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
That's so heartbreaking. Great Job.
sick-atxxheart
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
That was beautiful. Sad, but wonderfully written in a way that makes it seem real. Great job.
Hecate's Rath
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
Like I said before, I absolutely adore this. The perspective is so completely different from what we usually get--I feel like too often people focus on George after the war and we forget that Fred had friends and that they were just as affected by his death as George was. Beautiful work. I love the time increments, the repetition of "It is...however many days/months/years after the battle." Lovely job and thank you for sharing!
Dodger Gilmore
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
This was heartbreaking. Especially this line broke me: "But he makes the mistake of looking at George at the graveside, and that is when he falls apart." I could just picture that. I also really like the first part, about how he doesn't remember his reaction at first, but having been told he cried out...

It was a great story. More stories need to be written about Lee, I think.
maybeknot
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
Aw, another great fic.
bookwormofmassiveproportions
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
Aw, nice job with Lee! I love how seeing George is so painful for Lee, and how it reminds him Fred is gone, I thought that was a nice touch. (Bitter)sweet writing, and very well done!
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