 Karina 2009-10-24 . chapter 1 Amazing. Sad but perfect. Absolutely spot on! When I finally get around to making a real fanfic account for myself I will come and review every one of your stories and talk (in length)about how talented an author you are :) |
 Hermowninny 2009-10-11 . chapter 1Very sweet. I loved this! |
 Eternally Seventeen 2009-09-29 . chapter 1Oh, wow. That was so good, it actualluy brought tears into my eyes! VEry well-written and introspective. Keep it up! :) |
 larkinlover 2009-09-16 . chapter 1excellent drabble, I loved the time jumps. great little correlation with the current plot of birthdays and beyond too, Isawwhatyoudidthere. wonderful little tidbit, keep it up! |
 Starkiller 2009-09-07 . chapter 1Oh god, did that ever give me a lump in my throat. You've got to admit though, I am getting better at reading fics where Fred's is, erm, unFredded! XD Excellent piece of writing. You just get better and better with every story. |
 MBP 2009-09-05 . chapter 1You know, I read this when you first published it a week ago, and it just rocked me thoroughly... it was hard to believe how much, even, given how long ago this book came out -- but that, of course, is a testament to your writing, Katy, as always.
I love Lee. I always have. And I love the way you've portrayed him here. He was one of the people it had to be the hardest to be during that time, I would think. It's easy to forget the friends when you're so focused on the family, I think, but Lee is almost a Weasley given his closeness to the twins, and that's so clear in this story.
I loved the structure, too, as you moved days, months and finally a year away. It does get slightly easier, of course -- but it never really goes away. Brilliant job, as usual. |
 WishingHeart 2009-09-04 . chapter 1Amazing. :) I really love how you wrote Lee's personality. We don't get to see much of him, but I think it's perfect! |
 Writting2StayHalfSane 2009-09-01 . chapter 1I have chills! Poor Lee. He's often overlooked durring this time because George has lost his twin but Lee's lost his best friend. Well done! |
 NellieNotMolly 2009-08-31 . chapter 1Beautifully sad, because it is so real.
Love this: "...life is for living... they must live it to the full for the sake of those they lost... they have no choice." |
 GoddessofYouth 2009-08-31 . chapter 1That's so heartbreaking. Great Job. |
 sick-atxxheart 2009-08-31 . chapter 1That was beautiful. Sad, but wonderfully written in a way that makes it seem real. Great job. |
 Hecate's Rath 2009-08-31 . chapter 1Like I said before, I absolutely adore this. The perspective is so completely different from what we usually get--I feel like too often people focus on George after the war and we forget that Fred had friends and that they were just as affected by his death as George was. Beautiful work. I love the time increments, the repetition of "It is...however many days/months/years after the battle." Lovely job and thank you for sharing! |
 Dodger Gilmore 2009-08-31 . chapter 1This was heartbreaking. Especially this line broke me: "But he makes the mistake of looking at George at the graveside, and that is when he falls apart." I could just picture that. I also really like the first part, about how he doesn't remember his reaction at first, but having been told he cried out...
It was a great story. More stories need to be written about Lee, I think. |
 maybeknot 2009-08-31 . chapter 1Aw, another great fic. |
 bookwormofmassiveproportions 2009-08-31 . chapter 1Aw, nice job with Lee! I love how seeing George is so painful for Lee, and how it reminds him Fred is gone, I thought that was a nice touch. (Bitter)sweet writing, and very well done! |