Declaration of love my ass. She needed to throw his whiney ass out the air lock and run off with Jolee...er, what was I saying, oh yes...nice chapter.

I'm gonna quote Jolee here;

"That nearly brought a tear to this man's eye."

Need I say more?

Awesome job, Amme! :D Kinda like how you didn't add the near love thing, though I think the reason it was in the game was so it could continue the romance subplot. If you didn't have that well...you wouldn't have the true confession later. :P

Still, I like how you ended the conversation with Carth's embrace showing what he meant; even if it wasn't exactly meant as a love...yet. Great chapter and update soon!

God Bless!

Oh, this was so nice. I was wondering how you would handle this, and you did it beautifully. I liked the whole thing, and fell in love with Carth all over again. I never realised before that that whole 'I think I might love you' thing was kind of out of place before you mentioned it. As I have already said, you made the whole conversation just as it should be. I loved how defensive Connan was (I would be too, in her place) and how he managed to convince her. It was just right. AC

Let's see, how do you spell 'Connan'? Well, hm.. how about P-A-R-A-N-O-I-A?

Man. I'm torn on this story. On the one hand, I love that you're going deeper into the shock the PC must have been feeling upon realizing who she used to be. I love fics that go back and add depth where there wasn't time for it in the actual story. On the other hand, I want to sit Connan and Carth down in a room together and yell STOP FEELING SORRY FOR YOURSELVES AND LISTEN TO EACH OTHER! Hopefully we'll get to that soon? ^^; Anyways, you do seem to have a good grip on the characters, especially Jolee. Can't wait to read more.

Excellent chapter! You've really got into just what Connan is feeling and why she's feeling it, and it makes me wonder just how you've planned to make it all right. It seems pretty hard from here! Connan will need more than words to make her trust anybody again. It's a good thing your other stories tell me how this ends up, otherwise I might have a angst-overload! AC

Ouch. That would have hurt!
Keep up the good work!
EP

Don't worry about making the next chapter longer. We the readers don't mind. It's not as if we are going form an angry mob if you adjust the length of your chapters. *whispers to friends* I wasn't saying anything about angry mobs. What is all this about angry mobs? *cough* J.k. but i seriously love this story so much that if you pull a Revan and run away to the unknown regions without finishing this story, I might have to send my minions after you to force choke you for your stupidity. Wow did I just say all that? Must be the sugar. Don't drink caffinated drinks before bed. It messes with your head...

Girl, I love this story. You seriously make Connan a character everyone loves, and feel sorry for her, but want to smack her for her recklessness. And this chapter shows it. ^^ Awesome job and update soon!

God Bless!

Connan Suicidal.

Man, I really feel bad for Connan, especially after this. Too bad this didn't exactly happen during the last planet after Revan founds out her/his identity. Would make it very interesting and make the choices of what he/she could do to more determine which path to go.

Anyway, update when you get the chance. :)

God Bless!

It's AMAZING! You made me cry :-) The way you expressed their feelings is just great. I'm looking forward for next chapters.

This chapter made me cry when i read it yesterady, an i simply had to read it again today. Angst, yay! That is soo hard to write. great job =)

Nice to see more story. I hope your Granny gets better soon. As for calculus, I have complete sympathy for you. I failed calculus myself. Lucky for me, I didn't take it till college, so I got to drop the class.
Good luck to both your Granny and your calculus class!