I really loved this, and I think you're planning on( or have already) make Tidus the fiend. I really like this story( a side of the violence ^_^")

UPDATE FASTER IT GETS BORING TO WAIT FOR A STORY YOU LIKE I HAVE A VERY SHORT PATIENCE SO PLEASE UPDATE SOONER!!

so who are these oc's huh cuzin?
tell me! love the fight scene, the whole
sprinkler things ha XD
can't wait for more cousin!

hey sup cuzin! love the firsts chappie! XD

you should them go to zankerand because that wew tidus lived

Wow, it didn't seem like they were going to get out of beating Gippal, but thank Yevon for sprinkler systems, LOL!!

But now Yuna's locked in that mist, and how the heck are they going to get her out of that? <-don't answer that of course.

I liked your battle scenes; I think you did a great job on them!
Looking forward to what's next!

Oh my, a Rikku/Paine catfight...sheesh! She was **, lol!

sorry but how long my review took. the fight was cool. the aeons coming back is just plain awesome! keep it up.

wow, i nevr knew anyone wud use tidus as the villain b4 interesting ^^

I feel like my story isn't very interesting. Hm. =[

yays you've updated!
i certainly hope the
group will handle the aeons they are
tough guys
& wat abt yuna? wat happened
to her? ooh i cant w8 to read more!

Oh jeez! It seems like no one is safe from this fiend! I hope they're able to fight Gippal. He's a tough one.

"You WERE dreaming of a naked Lulu!"

LOL! That made me giggle. Wakka's awesome.

posessed gippal? sweet! the mystery of the fiend is starting to unfold. good chapter. good luck with your school work.

O this is getting good!