Lol

jealous about the pillow..oh come on Nat-chan..but i like it..:)

L0L. natsuki got jealous over a pillow! XDD

Again, this was effin cute! XD

This made me _

So sweet! I feel for Natsuki...the hell we'd lose to a mere pillow! 'Hug me Shizuru I'm the real thing' hahaha - that is me going insane.

Thank you :)

Waki

It's always a joy to read your fics! I'm really a sucker for sweet and happy endings which I think we shared in common! Keep writing, I'll keep reviewing! Ja ne!

That was good

Very cute, and I did see -read- the humor in it :)

Aww, this one was VERY cute too x3!

b

what a protective girlfriend shizuru have... she even got jealous with some pillow! what a unbelievable person... good story, i like it

BWAHAHAHAHAHAAHA! TOTALLY HILARIOUS! REALLY!

'Like hell am I losing to a stupid pillow!'

'Mayo and Tea land is for me and Shizuru ONLY.'

SERIOUSLY!

Aww, hehehehe. Funny and sweet! Very minor, if any, errors here, and you wrote well. I like this line the best:

"... however upon seeing said girlfriend’s disappointed and deprived sleeping face, Natsuki’s determination to glare a tea-deficit dream world into the brunette’s mind was lost."

Tea-deficit dream world - lol!

The only problem I have with this (and a majority of other fics) is how Shizuru's hair is described as "brunette", which means dark-haired or dark brown hair, which is opposite to what she has, which is light brown hair. It could be argued that it's a dirty blond or whatever. I know, it's a trivial, but still. P

In any case, I enjoyed this. There's a bunch of great one-liners. I love the use of "thwarted" - you just don't see it around that much, ha! Just the overall description of Natsuki being grumpy inside and out, yet softens up anyway, is simply adorable. And that omake was hilarious! So there ya go. )

so cute :)

Very cute.

Lol, Natsuki got jealous over a pillow tehehe that's too funny to think about :D

Hahaha, so cute!