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Reviews for: Lola
catko
2009-09-17 . chapter 1
Loved the theme, and the building of the relationships among the characters. I wanted Nina and Ben to be together forever, but I'm glad someone feels sad about them splitting up. Touching.
Kali-Nineteen
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
Nice job for your first fic. :) Poor Benji and Sam. :( Although, I've got to tell you that the chacaters did seem a bit OOC. Hmm, I think this is the first "friendship" genre Reaper story... Yet again, I have been wrong before. Anyway, good short. :)
BlueSunflower
2009-08-30 . chapter 1
Oh! Awesome set-up for the twist. I disagree with CK, I *do* think Sam would put 2+2 together that fast. He's certainly done it before, especially when he had to figure out how the vessels worked.
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