Oh that was so funny. I loved it.

This is the first time that I read medic slash and you did a fine job with it.

Wow, I love this story! You have to do more like it. Very hot. You are a very talented writer, and should definately continue.

A very nice read. ^_^

Now... I wonder what would happen if Optimus unwittingly removed his mask in front of Megatron... XD

That explains why Ratchet said thanks for choosing me.

Well written!

This isn't beta-read so, yeah, Eerie Iri is right. There is some awkwardness in the sentence structure and flow. The ending was brusque for example. However, I do like the taboo concept even if I don’t necessarily like the pairing. The integration of a sparkbonding/merging method is also good because I’ve never grasped the plug-and-play or other methods that are attributed to the Transformers relations.

Mature rated or otherwise, I don’t see why there aren’t more fics like this one. Sure, they’re similar to human beings in some aspects, but the Transformers *are* robots who come from another planet. I’m sure they harbor a ton of unique customs and special traditions in their own right.

This made me smile throughout the entire thing. It was really good! There were a few mistakes, and a sentence or two that could have been phrased a little better, but otherwise, this was really good. I didn't see any obvious grammar mistakes such as you not capitilizing letters, or not usng periods or commas. So, good job!^_^

Amazing! Good Story!

Wow! Hot!