awesome

I loved it!
Definitely how Hermione's parents could have acted and I liked how her Mum and Dad had distinct personalities. Excellent writing.

This is beautifully written. In truth, I had never given much thought to how Hermione would have felt about erasing her parents memories, and I am very impressed with how you portrayed that. You had me slightly teary-eyed at the end! Great work!

I almost never like any fanfictions that aren't romance, but this fic was absolutely fantastic. It was well written, did an amazing job showing what it would be like for Hermione's parent, and was quite simply something I really enjoyed reading. Keep writing.

I do think it was beautifully made and great and very touching. Congrats'!

What a beautiful and powerful story. I've always wondered about how muggle relatives deal with wizards in their families. Hermione's parents were more open-minded than most, but I think you showed the difficulties that they faced. Very, very well done. Nice pacing, good work with the flashback and setting. Excellent story all the way around!

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http:// w w w . geocities . com /sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)

It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student