Interesting new take on the background of McGonagall! I've never heard this one before, and I'm quite impressed with it so far! Keep writing; I'm waiting anxiously for an update!

insaneflautist

ARGH! I can't believe you never wrote anymore of this! It's a totally original plot(and anything with MM in it is good *smile
Oh well...

Linz

Interesting start. The first few paragraphs were a tad confusing, but it seems to have cleared up. Please continue, I'm interested to see where this goes.

Ok... I am very curious who the proffesor is, probably Sprout

intreging(sp?), you gonna add more soon?

And then what happened? Come on, this is really interesting ... you've got to keep going!

Now this is an interesting beginning. I'm guessing it has to be McGonagall because of the hair. I certainly never imagined her being born into the underworld, but hey, I'm open to any interpretation! Keep going!