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Reviews for: A Definition of Cheating
daphne 13
2009-12-30 . chapter 1
loved it! ;)
Natra aka tigerlily-Spirit
2009-10-20 . chapter 1
So... You think she was in love with Tom?
Severus my hero
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
Amazing work!
fantasyra
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
Hm, Its an intresting take, and the first time I have seen it. I do find I am a bit disterbed though, she was eleven at the time and the idea or images you protraied, though not really stated... disturbed me.

It might be because it was not what I was expecting from the tital but I think its more from the young aspect.

Still, decently done, though its not anything I acutally enjoyed reading because of the disterbance. No real judment here, just a personal opionion. Sorry for the miss spelling, but there you are mate.
HeatherRiddle
2009-09-02 . chapter 1
I liked it. It would have been a lot better if you could have cleaned up the grammar and such. I didn't read it TOO thoroughly so I can't say that there were NO grammar errors, but I didn't notice any. It was just clunky in some spots, which is never good with a piece like this. Aside from that, I liked it. It's one of those things you want a sequel to but you never get because that would ruin it.
David Fishwick
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
Excellent and thanks for writing.
Cecilia
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
Next one please...very very fast...
I am very interested.
Jav-chan
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
I absoltely love the way that you write this pairing. I didn't even think that Riddle could be considered available. Absolute love.

It's wonderfully dark and just...wow.

You just render me speechless with this. Can we expect more along this vein of writing.

Btw, link please for shadows?
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