 daphne 13 2009-12-30 . chapter 1loved it! ;) |
 Natra aka tigerlily-Spirit 2009-10-20 . chapter 1 So... You think she was in love with Tom? |
 Severus my hero 2009-09-28 . chapter 1Amazing work! |
 fantasyra 2009-09-03 . chapter 1Hm, Its an intresting take, and the first time I have seen it. I do find I am a bit disterbed though, she was eleven at the time and the idea or images you protraied, though not really stated... disturbed me.
It might be because it was not what I was expecting from the tital but I think its more from the young aspect.
Still, decently done, though its not anything I acutally enjoyed reading because of the disterbance. No real judment here, just a personal opionion. Sorry for the miss spelling, but there you are mate. |
 HeatherRiddle 2009-09-02 . chapter 1I liked it. It would have been a lot better if you could have cleaned up the grammar and such. I didn't read it TOO thoroughly so I can't say that there were NO grammar errors, but I didn't notice any. It was just clunky in some spots, which is never good with a piece like this. Aside from that, I liked it. It's one of those things you want a sequel to but you never get because that would ruin it. |
 David Fishwick 2009-08-31 . chapter 1Excellent and thanks for writing. |
 Cecilia 2009-08-31 . chapter 1 Next one please...very very fast...
I am very interested. |
 Jav-chan 2009-08-31 . chapter 1I absoltely love the way that you write this pairing. I didn't even think that Riddle could be considered available. Absolute love.
It's wonderfully dark and just...wow.
You just render me speechless with this. Can we expect more along this vein of writing.
Btw, link please for shadows? |