I just wonder how you can manage to make such a short passage so powerful!! I could literally feel the sadness and desperation in those few words, the tragedy of a forbidden love born in a black heart. How could Vergil truly believe he is so evil if he can stop himself from corrupting what he so secretly longs for?
Surely that is so selfless in itself even to evaluate it like that in his mind! I loved it, can you tell?
Tora.

that was awesome!

Oh... dear... God! Its prose! The bane of my existence. In all my years of writing, I could never get that right to save my life. And yet when you do it it makes a helluva lot more sense than anything I can muster.

Brilliant Job!

Hey Shy,

This little poem was good and yes I think you should do lady's response, it would be interesting to see the dark slayer through her eyes. Can't wait to see what you come up with.

^_^

Wonderfully touching. Lady is Vergil's salvation? Lovely.

"Given the time and absence it only expands and pulsates"--Distance always makes my heart grow yonder. Where's Lady's perspective? I'd like to read it. I dont think ive paid much attention to LxV pairings, but when it comes to mind i suppose it would be the most interesting. Thumbs up

This fic, I like...ALOT. This was very innovative poignant, I could clearly picture this event taking place. I love the title of this fic too.

Boss

Wow...