Oh my God this is gorgeous! And poignant, too. I LOVE it. Just love it.

So sweet!

I loved it.

o0o0o. you wrote this in 30minutes?

niice. if i did that with my story, it would just be useless drabble! hehe

interesting insight into j/a first meeting :D

-jenn

Wow, that was EXTREMELY well written! The wording is just so captivating. I love it!

I really liked this. It was a little glimpse into Alice's origins (well, not human origins, but where she came from before she and Jasper joined the Cullen family).

Oh, that was beautiful. Great interpretation of the sense of sight! Alice's is purely unique! Great job!

Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing it.

I love how you write, always showing, never telling. You write like you're painting a picture, the more you look the more you see.

Good luck with the contest :)