Someone should write about a romance between Todd and Kurt. But Kurt should be younger. This was great though, great job. :)

I think you really nailed the book to a tee when it comes to the actual wording of the song. Well done. (:

This isn't so bad. It sounds like it has a sort of Bo Diddley beat. If you'lre looking for a much better movie than APT PUPIL that has almost the same story, you should see THE READER with Kate Winslet.

I really like this. I too wouldn't have thought of making up a song, or poem, to this film. And yet I think this is great :)

Very interesting work! I would never have thought of writing a song based on this movie, but I like it.

Not bad at all :) I'd love to hear this set to music.