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so cute XDXD

Wao. Tsuna's way too gleeful.
But that's all right. However, eh. There are quite a number of mistakes, but I'm sure you can figure them out--so I won't say much.

This prologue needs flow. Hahan. It's cute, though.

Keep on going! Your story is quite cute. AND IT IS TRAGEDY TOO. Tragedy=angst. Angst = love. Oh yes. I love angst. So, please, by all means, keep on going! Write until the end! Please~

Thank you!

It great this time and longer.I hope to see your next one!