   Digital Damita 4/7/03 . chapter 1*crys* oh and she wont get a chance she dies oh noo i love teh coupling |
| Illuminate 11/9/02 . chapter 1 Wow. That was the cutest Jane and Neil fic I've read. I hope you decide to write more like it! |
| RO 1/31/02 . chapter 1 Very, very good.
They are... well, simply them.
Keep on writting. I want more. I read the other reviews and WE want more!
Only a remark: Did she think so clear about her feelings for him? I think she would be more confused.
WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! But please, don't kill them. They worth survive and we could see what happens... _
Answer me, please, if you don't mind. I will like more contact. |
| toiletseatgirl 1/26/02 . chapter 1 Sweet! That was awesome! Please say you'll write more, oh please oh please oh please! |
| Kyoko Takahashi 1/14/02 . chapter 1 This fic is a bit funny but I like it |
| LadyKayoss 1/12/02 . chapter 1 Aww... I like Neil/Jane fics, and it's nice to see that there are more and more of them popping up online. If only we could have seen more in the movie. |
| Nekessla 1/8/02 . chapter 1 Cute, very cute. |
| Ovo 1/8/02 . chapter 1 Bravo! I thought there was more time between the Tuscon mission and the arrest scene, but you used it a lot better than I ever could. Very well done. |
| IngridSarah 1/7/02 . chapter 1 Yay! Very in character! Excellent! |
| Sarah 1/7/02 . chapter 1 Tiiiiiiiiiiight. Write on! great story and you've got them characterized perfect! MORE MORE MORE! |
| CreedsGalBirdy 1/7/02 . chapter 1 Right on, sista soldier! I like it! Very cute w/out being all sugary and mushy... just like the oatmeal Grandma used to make. |
| keight 1/7/02 . chapter 1 one of the most heart melting moments, i just love it, i've been reading so much janeneil fics and they just wont stop the development. i loooooooove this fic! write the next part but make it good! _ |
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