 IlovetowriteSMP 2009-12-17 . chapter 13Love this part:
That's right, you think I'm sexy in my suit,” Johnny smirked.
“Very sexy,” Lulu nodded, kissing Johnny chastely on the lips. |
 IlovetowriteSMP 2009-12-10 . chapter 12That really upsets me. I thought I looked like a movie star,” Johnny said sarcastically.
Great line. Jason and Johnny as superheroes is pretty cute/fun. |
 IlovetowriteSMP 2009-12-03 . chapter 11That was an emotion packed chapter for sure! |
 IlovetowriteSMP 2009-11-20 . chapter 10Great chapter! I loved Helena's part at the beginning. |
 Sweetmel78 2009-11-20 . chapter 10You killed olivia!! :) great update! |
 IlovetowriteSMP 2009-11-13 . chapter 9That was a fantastic chapter! Wow. Very nicely done. |
 IlovetowriteSMP 2009-11-06 . chapter 8That scene with Nikolas was funny and cute. |
 Sweetmel78 2009-11-06 . chapter 8I love the crap that the other guys gave Johnny! :P Great job! |
 IlovetowriteSMP 2009-10-30 . chapter 7That was a great chapter! Glad they got their feelings out in the open. |
 IlovetowriteSMP 2009-10-23 . chapter 6Great dialogue between Jolu. I like Johnny and Spinelli being friends too. |
 IlovetowriteSMP 2009-10-08 . chapter 5Lulu being in love with his alter ego reminds me of Clark Kent/Superman with Lois. Cuteness! |
 Sweetmel78 2009-10-08 . chapter 5wow, they are so determined to get Lulu. Going to give any hints why? Great update :-) |
 IlovetowriteSMP 2009-09-25 . chapter 4This fic is a lot of fun. Love the concept and the dialogue. |
 Sweetmel78 2009-09-25 . chapter 4Johnny is jealous of himself! Lol! Loved the update! |
 IlovetowriteSMP 2009-09-13 . chapter 3Love this dialogue:
. “It's a great party.”
“I haven't had to kill anyone yet,” Nikolas smiled.
“And no signs of mass murderers?” Johnny questioned with a laugh to cover the seriousness of the question.
“Unfortunately no,” Nikolas answered with a laugh as well.
You have a very creative mind |