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IlovetowriteSMP
2009-12-17 . chapter 13
Love this part:

That's right, you think I'm sexy in my suit,” Johnny smirked.

“Very sexy,” Lulu nodded, kissing Johnny chastely on the lips.
IlovetowriteSMP
2009-12-10 . chapter 12
That really upsets me. I thought I looked like a movie star,” Johnny said sarcastically.

Great line. Jason and Johnny as superheroes is pretty cute/fun.
IlovetowriteSMP
2009-12-03 . chapter 11
That was an emotion packed chapter for sure!
IlovetowriteSMP
2009-11-20 . chapter 10
Great chapter! I loved Helena's part at the beginning.
Sweetmel78
2009-11-20 . chapter 10
You killed olivia!! :) great update!
IlovetowriteSMP
2009-11-13 . chapter 9
That was a fantastic chapter! Wow. Very nicely done.
IlovetowriteSMP
2009-11-06 . chapter 8
That scene with Nikolas was funny and cute.
Sweetmel78
2009-11-06 . chapter 8
I love the crap that the other guys gave Johnny! :P Great job!
IlovetowriteSMP
2009-10-30 . chapter 7
That was a great chapter! Glad they got their feelings out in the open.
IlovetowriteSMP
2009-10-23 . chapter 6
Great dialogue between Jolu. I like Johnny and Spinelli being friends too.
IlovetowriteSMP
2009-10-08 . chapter 5
Lulu being in love with his alter ego reminds me of Clark Kent/Superman with Lois. Cuteness!
Sweetmel78
2009-10-08 . chapter 5
wow, they are so determined to get Lulu. Going to give any hints why? Great update :-)
IlovetowriteSMP
2009-09-25 . chapter 4
This fic is a lot of fun. Love the concept and the dialogue.
Sweetmel78
2009-09-25 . chapter 4
Johnny is jealous of himself! Lol! Loved the update!
IlovetowriteSMP
2009-09-13 . chapter 3
Love this dialogue:

. “It's a great party.”

“I haven't had to kill anyone yet,” Nikolas smiled.

“And no signs of mass murderers?” Johnny questioned with a laugh to cover the seriousness of the question.

“Unfortunately no,” Nikolas answered with a laugh as well.


You have a very creative mind
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