This is a pretty good story, BUT:
1) The girls do not have their own rooms.
2) The dormitories have furnace heat for just that reason- no floo powder.
3) Boys can't get into the girls' dormitory. In the 5th book, Ron tries to tell Hermione something and runs for the stairs to the girls' dormitory. The stairs turn into a steep slide, and an alarm sounds.
4) Because he girls do not have their own rooms, every bed is a 4-poster curtained bed. So, even if there WAS a fireplace for Draco to get in- he wouldn't have seen anything.
...That about covers it, I think. Anyway, bye-bye!
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JESUS! You can't leave it there!*Katie*

as usual i loved it and it was extrordinarily well writen however HERMIONE MUST CHOSE DRACO! sorry had to get that out draco is my favorite character and i think hermione would e lucky to be with him, still great job!

love,

Chibi Demon

Very hardcore, with the Hermione/Draco on the bed thing. It's cool, I really like it and I hope there's more to come.

How could you kill Harry? Worst of all Draco and Hermine(sp?) What planet with unintelligable life did you come from?

AHHHHHHHH! I love it! Please dont make hermoine fall for draco, she should go w/ ron! ok... if u make ron die, i will personally conclude your story and make him come back to life. sniff harry! he's dead? no! Well, n e wayz, i love it. its one of my fav. harry potter fics.
jen

Not bad. Well-written. Me like.

Pretty good story. Do me a fav...hook me up with Wood in a story. and just wandering...where does Ron have TB? His lungs? That is were ben had it...::Starts crying God I hate my life.:Key board is all wet You did good Rae-chan. Keep going.

Your Friend,

Trin

This is sad. -.- I'm writing my own reviews! C'mon people! R&R!

pretty good nice switching pov

*wails* I'm crying! You upset me soooo much! H/Hr, what WERE you THINKING!

oh, and Harry's dead... pity.

great story so far please write more!**

MWHAHAHAHAHAHA! GOOD JOB! But, it was VERY TOO TOO TOO SHORT! Post more soon!

WONDERFUL! HARRY'S DEAD! WHOOHOOOOO! Even though I LOVE Harry with all my heart, I think he has to die...it's just the perfect ending the stories! GOOD JOB!

O.O wow...good! :speechless for a moment then realizes something: MUST FINISH!

i want a good ending. i know where you live. it was good. it'd b better if it had a nice ending..