|Reviews for Out of Control|
| ShyLittleDevil 12/18/12 . chapter 6
This was written very very well. I love the movie and this just goes so perfectly with it. I always thought of what might of happened before the movie started, but you nailed it for me. Thanks for writing this :) it was amazing to read, even though it's dark and tragic.
| Lover of Fantasy 8/2/12 . chapter 5
Another great chapter from you. I loved it. It was better than the original.
| alsin 8/2/12 . chapter 5
Amazing chapter :)
:O the second to last chapter :O I really love this story. I'll definitely miss it when it's finished
| sess18 8/2/12 . chapter 5
update soon please
| Miss Savvy 6/26/12 . chapter 4
Great chapter; looking forward to your next update. :)
| brooklynsam3 6/25/12 . chapter 4
I totally understand you. This is how I thought actually happened (but did not in the movie). And it's a lot more realistic. I can't wait for more. ( haha! Yes I can wait. )
| takara410 6/21/12 . chapter 3
| alsin 6/21/12 . chapter 3
I can't wait for the next one )
And when Lisa saw the truck i was all :O
| Lover of Fantasy 6/21/12 . chapter 3
This re-edited chapter was definitely a better enchantment of the first one. I can't wait to read the next one. I really love how we're getting more insight on Fenton's thoughts. We didn't get that in the first time you edited this story.
| jlynnm87 6/20/12 . chapter 3
Just out of curiosity why, being a science teacher, is Fenton not concerned about ejaculating inside of a non sexually-active teen girl? Wouldn't her getting pregnant risk him getting caught or does he not care?
| sess18 6/8/12 . chapter 2
Update soon please.
| Lover of Fantasy 6/8/12 . chapter 2
Just as captivating as before. This re-edit is definitely giving us readers more insight on Fenton. I’m loving it. I can’t wait for the next update.
| bubbletime 6/6/12 . chapter 2
Your story is really good. I read it before and I can't wait until you post the next part. Update soon :)
| alsin 5/27/12 . chapter 2
AMAZING chapter ..Again )
| fangler 5/26/12 . chapter 1
I watched this movie today ( one of my fav movies ) and I thought that maby there would be some fanfictions of Donna/Richard. Then I found yours! Posted in 2009, oops... I don't think you are going to continue this but if you are could you please tell me ) I would definetly follow this! I need to know what happens next! And yeah in a sick way I love Richard and Donna in the movie...