This was written very very well. I love the movie and this just goes so perfectly with it. I always thought of what might of happened before the movie started, but you nailed it for me. Thanks for writing this :) it was amazing to read, even though it's dark and tragic.

Another great chapter from you. I loved it. It was better than the original.

Amazing chapter :)
:O the second to last chapter :O I really love this story. I'll definitely miss it when it's finished

update soon please

Great chapter; looking forward to your next update. :)

I totally understand you. This is how I thought actually happened (but did not in the movie). And it's a lot more realistic. I can't wait for more. ( haha! Yes I can wait. )

Like it

AMAZING chapter

I can't wait for the next one )

And when Lisa saw the truck i was all :O

This re-edited chapter was definitely a better enchantment of the first one. I can't wait to read the next one. I really love how we're getting more insight on Fenton's thoughts. We didn't get that in the first time you edited this story.

Just out of curiosity why, being a science teacher, is Fenton not concerned about ejaculating inside of a non sexually-active teen girl? Wouldn't her getting pregnant risk him getting caught or does he not care?

Update soon please.

Just as captivating as before. This re-edit is definitely giving us readers more insight on Fenton. I’m loving it. I can’t wait for the next update.

Your story is really good. I read it before and I can't wait until you post the next part. Update soon :)

AMAZING chapter ..Again )

I watched this movie today ( one of my fav movies ) and I thought that maby there would be some fanfictions of Donna/Richard. Then I found yours! Posted in 2009, oops... I don't think you are going to continue this but if you are could you please tell me ) I would definetly follow this! I need to know what happens next! And yeah in a sick way I love Richard and Donna in the movie...