Pretty good RokuNami lemon! :P

this was really good! i loved the describing words you used escpecially about Roxas! man, you made him so lazy and sexy! loved it

OMG THAT WAS AWESOME!

love it

Why is this wonderful story lacking reviews? This is probably the best smut story for this pairing, and considering that they are both terribly asexual and innocent, you've really hit the spot. So, be proud. :D

Man, I can't express in words how much I like this story. Naminé is in-character, hot but naïve, and Roxas is excited and feeling but still has that hint of apathy.

Damn, I really love reading this over an over again.

This is a very good story, though I would have liked it if you had finished the rest of the sex scene between Roxas and Namine. This site needs more lemon stories about Roxas and Namine.

you don't know how awkward it is for me to say this, but:

i really like the way you wrote this - it's in precise detail and everything! yeah, i'm aware that it's a smut but it's one of the very few good het smuts out there. kudos.