Great story you should write more HisagixOrihimes. This was awesome.

I love it! I liked everything and doesn't matter if it's corny... nice story!1

please write another Shuuhei x Orihime fanfic! i love this couple to death, and this is the best story of this pairing that i've read so far! great job!

why are all the good stories so short? XD I would love to read chapters and chapters of this. Hisagi and Orihime make a good match, and you were able to capture that really well <3 Luv it

Oh! How cute, you have now made me a fan of thing pairing ^^

Not corny!
But LMFAO did he at least survive? Poor guy. XD

-_- I didnt like the beginning.
Then I read the end.
And went back and reread it...
=D AND LOVED IT~!
Ha ha good job~
Kudos~

i don't care if it was corny. everyone loves corn, even if they don't admit it.

woohoo! i love bleach. i love smut. and i love both orihime and hisagi! awesomely awesome, and i will read the next chapter happily.

xD Wow, the ending was hillarious! Too funny!

This is really really good :D!
I really like the thought of these two as a couple and I really want to see what happens in the morning please!
I feel so sorry for hisagi though !

Very awesome! I'd love to see what happens the morning after! xD Please write another chapter to this!

Keep going! I commented on your Kensei/Hime one too, but these are both pairings that I think we need to see more of... and you're a damned good writer, so please do more <3