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Berry Smoothie 8/19/11 . chapter 20
have i ever told you (and woody2792) how awesome this is! pass that on to woody too, please.
Alisha 4/8/11 . chapter 23
Really? You can't just end it like that! It was a really good story and I thought it was awesome!
FANPIRE-LULU 4/8/11 . chapter 23
love it. love lovw lovw it. it was an awesome ending and totally worth waiting for. great job xxx
SighingWinter 3/30/11 . chapter 23
This was great!
NoName 3/29/11 . chapter 23
Great great story, loved reading it. But you wrote an unworthy ending for it. I also kinda feel like I've wasted my time think about chapter 24? To make it up?
Hannelovestiva 3/28/11 . chapter 23
Perfect end
Great story..
loofoca 3/28/11 . chapter 23
VERY GOOD STORY! The final was just perfect!
Kylemoor 3/27/11 . chapter 23
The ending does not give much closure. I might suggest a short epilogue to tie things off a little better.
lily 3/27/11 . chapter 23
Serioulsy? 23 chapters and like 2 years of story and this is how you end it? Not even a real kiss, a date or even them telling each other their feelings... I feel like I wasted my time.
PeasPlease 3/26/11 . chapter 22
Well this is really good and I can't wait for the next chapter so please update soon!ยก
fiona.s.t 3/23/11 . chapter 22
OMG! i love it
i love you for updating! add again soon!
scubagurl22 3/22/11 . chapter 22
Yikes! I'm guessing it wasn't just a little cut on the arm?
StarKiss666 3/21/11 . chapter 22
oh, shit! lol That was good!
Alexandra 3/19/11 . chapter 21
Please update a new chapter! xxxx Love this story 3
a.a 3/17/11 . chapter 21
Please update soon. Bated breath etc.
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