Creepy and downright amazing.

5 to 9 years old?

I so hate japanese children after Fatal Frame...

They were THE most creepy ghosts!

But your fic was too cool.

I think I'll survive. Hehe

Oh god this is creepy... Then again, this is Fatal Frame we are talking about, with some extremely gruesome shinto rituals that for some reason always require little girls as sacrifices, hehe...

Very well written. But there is one thing I'd like to point out; Shigure and Minamo was impaled in the enclosed room, and Minamo was impaled before Shigure.

Other than that, it was really good. You really captured Hisames personality well. Even though this is just a fanfiction, I can picture her dying like that.

Nice job!

I love the handmaidens, yet there are only a few stories about them. I always expect more stories about the handmaidens.

Thanks for writing this!