| Reviews for Indulgence |
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Clovergirl100 10/17/11 . chapter 2Awwww! That was soooo cute I wonder when the next chapter will be out . It was funny seeing Tokiya jealous! |
Clovergirl100 10/17/11 . chapter 1Omg! That just happened ! Well I'm going to find out what happens next Off to the next chapter ps I really like the twist |
ohayou 6/2/11 . chapter 2Cute oneshots! Keep it up! :) |
yanagi-chyan 2/13/11 . chapter 2hey! long time no see.. :) omg.. i haven't read a tofuu fic since ages.. i miss them so much! just got back to the tofuu fandom and ur fic caught my eye.. really great dialogue and truly realistic storyline! hehe, i enjoyed both chapters very much.. glad to see that u showed both povs.. unique and creative idea for us readers to know what the other is feeling. so cute and nice! good job and pls write more! hope to see u soon! :D |
winoa13 1/8/11 . chapter 2HAHAHA! That was awesome! :)) i love both chaps:)) it's been a while since i read tofuu! Really, I miss it :)) MORE PLEASE! xD :)) |
khryzle 12/27/10 . chapter 2 i dont need to log in.. even my own screen name here give me the creeps.. how much more for everyone! hahaha.. anyway, i was just rattling. here's my review. well, i thought the first chapter was kinda too cheesy for my taste. and im not saying im no fan of cheesy stuff, but with tofuu its kinda well,.unsettling. but dont worry, not only you do that. *raises hand* worst offender here! hahah.. but ive learned to be discret on the cheesiness now, unlike before. chapter two was... hmm... surprisingly refreshing. it was simple, and is easier to relate. i mean, mobile phones are everywhere! i guess what i really like about ur works is because you narrate the story with precision and straightforwardness.. no shakespeare bullshit or much hyperbole (dont look at me, i know im another worst offender again). but thats the reason why im attracted to ur writing.. because its totally different from mine. opposite attracts. just like tofuu! please make another oneshot and make it soon! cheers and regards, khryzlekawaii |
Shirayuki Sayura 12/26/10 . chapter 2 this chap is so cute, i wonder who the guy Fuuko is talking to? just a friend? hope you write another chap for this fic |
Anne Raven 12/25/10 . chapter 2That was absolutely kawaii! Mi-chan should learn how to block SMS messages and call barring helps too.. ahaha |
miss.licorice 12/25/10 . chapter 2Sweet! So was her companion a girl or a gay guy? |
Nils 12/25/10 . chapter 2Aamzing! It's been a long time since I read a ToFuu fic... it was good! I liked the idea and the style of writing! Good job! I can't wait for the next chapter! :) |
TuckingFypo 12/25/10 . chapter 2Aww! So Fuuko-chan probably planned that to make Mi-chan jealous? X3 |
yanagichyan 5/17/10 . chapter 1 hahahahahaha, so cute! LOVE this! among the cutest one-shots i've ever read! and I KNEW IT! i knew tokiya would say that in the end, hahahah! aww, that was so sweet! great fic, eirist-chan! more, please! :D |
Mayumi Reiko 5/12/10 . chapter 1kyaaa I like it! hahaha more more please i want more |
tian-shi-de-chi-bang 1/2/10 . chapter 1wah! perfect fic ever! hahaha! i just love it! more chaps please! i'm craving for more! i would love a coffee mug like that! |
thecoldprincess 10/31/09 . chapter 1what a naughty tokiya. haha. love it. :) |