wow, this is great. nice amount of angst. poor j though... origional, this is the first fic where sarah comes off as tough with out getting walked on (or lain on) by jareth. go sarah!

Wow, that was weird, well written, but I am not sure what he is jealous of though...still, good descriptive language. Keep up the good work.

Amazing. You've got all the intensity and angst just right... And you didn't make Sarah a simpering wimp! Yay! Lovely stuff.

Wow... I mean really, wow. That was just.. just... wow. It's all I can think of.

wow, amazing story. its errie. youi have great ideas. its kind of mean to J, but i still like it.

intersting story. well written

Wow, that was amazing. That's all I can say.