Wow, that was amazing. So beautiful and so vivid that I could completely picture Donner's actions. You are an amazing writer and I'm glad you wrote this fic. It is one of the best ones I have ever read.

this was so awesome :P i Love Donner and Zoe :P please write more :)

Wow, we really need more DG fic. I loved it _

I love your writing. It's very inspiring and a great read. Keep up the great work.

Squeaky

Ah.. Poor Donnor. Loved this veryveryvery much! Favorite line: the mars dust wouldn't. Very well written, realistic thoughts. the show really makes you wonder 'what if...' donnor know she had a miscarriage? great story. PLEASE PLEASE MORE!

I love this fic! I'm not sure I like the possibility of Donner knowing it was his baby, but this fic is still really really good.

Excellent! Very tense and fast and in-character. I've wondered all week if he figured it out. Your version would fit the show perfectly.

I'm happy there's fic for this show. It's really good. Thanks for writing this.

I love this new show and am so glad to see some fan fiction for it! This was an intense episode and I actually found myself on the edge of my seat - something I haven't done since Lost ended last season. Thanks for posting this interesting point of view from Donner. I hope to read more from you!

Great insight into Donner's thoughts. Can't wait for what you write next.

AirDragon717